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Dane Whitlock

Dane Whitlock

A second-year student who had never lost a formal duel at Solmere, and whose ability the saga is deliberately withholding.

The reputation

Ch. 292, from Finn:

FNN: The one everyone's been afraid of since before we got here. [...] Genuinely that good, from what I've heard. He's never lost a formal duel at this academy. Not once, in two full years.

Physically: a full head taller than Corin, broader through the shoulders, holding a practice blade "with the particular unhurried ease of someone who had never once needed to prove anything to anyone".

He loses, and does not mind

Corin beats him in a weapons-only format by abandoning blocks for deflections and then simply accelerating past what Dane can answer. Four seconds for the final exchange.

DAN: There it is.

He said it with something that sounded almost like satisfaction.

Afterwards:

DAN: That was fast. COR: I've been working on it. DAN: Clearly. Nobody's taken a clean strike off me in two years.

Arthur's observation is the one the chapter ends on:

He had lost. He did not, Arthur noted, seem remotely concerned about it. That, more than anything else in the entire duel, was the detail that stayed with Arthur.

What Sutton says

Overheard by Arthur on his way to the endurance course, said to another instructor "not quietly enough".

SUT: In a weapons-only format, certainly. If abilities had been permitted, that boy wouldn't have lasted eleven seconds. INS: That badly? SUT: Whitlock's ability is one of the three most dangerous in this entire academy, and I include the faculty in that assessment. Ashby earned that win fairly, within the format's rules, and he should be proud of it. But he should also understand precisely what those rules were protecting him from.

So there are three abilities at Solmere in that class, at least one of them a second-year student's, and the faculty are counted among the rest.

He is from Lassiter, and something is wrong there

Ch. 307. He stops attending meals, which Arthur notices on the fourth day, and Talon supplies the rest:

TLN: He's had letters. [...] Three this week. That's unusual for him. He gets one a month, ordinarily, and answers it the same evening. ART: Has he said anything? TLN: Dane doesn't say things. That's rather his whole approach.

At the same time, Lassiter has suspended its three northernmost eastern crossings indefinitely without explanation. See ../events/the-crossings-closure.md.

The withholding is deliberate

Dane's ability is deliberately NOT revealed here; he keeps winning and nobody can quite describe how, which should read as eerie rather than impressive.

Ch. 292 is that withholding starting early. See ../volumes/09-the-scholar.md.

What his ability looks like

Ch. 311 shows it and does not name it. A fourth-year fires accelerated projectiles at him three times.

the projectiles crossed the marked ground toward Dane and then, somewhere in the space between them, stopped mattering.

They did not stop. They did not deflect or shatter or dissipate. They simply arrived slower than they had left, and then slower still, and by the time they reached where Dane was standing they had lost whatever it was that made a projectile a projectile at all.

He walks the whole distance at an ordinary pace and ends the match by pushing the man over the line with a hand on his shoulder.

The arena's response is the detail the chapter wants:

The arena's applause was polite, and considerably quieter than it had been for Finn.

What the field actually does

Ch. 317, twenty-four minutes of it, from inside.

He does not move from where he starts for twenty-three of those minutes.

There was no wall. That was the part he could not explain to himself [...] There was nothing to break through, nothing to push against, nothing that resisted him at all. He simply arrived slower than he had left. And then slower than that.

his strikes fell out of the air like something dropped rather than thrown

Arthur lands four strikes in nineteen minutes. "All four had felt like touching someone through a mattress."

It has a radius, and it costs him

Arthur works this out by accident at fourteen minutes, stumbling backward out of an exchange and feeling his own weight return.

It was not a line. It was a gradient, thickening steadily toward Dane and thinning toward the marked ground's perimeter, and somewhere around thirty feet out a person could move like a person again.

Which meant it had a radius. Which meant it cost something to hold.

ART: I'm finding out how long you can keep it up.

It has a second setting

At twenty-three minutes he stops asking Arthur to yield and says "Enough".

The gradient collapsed inward and became something absolute, and the difference was not a matter of degree, it was categorical, the way a slope differs from a cliff.

Everything stopped. Not slowed. Stopped. His forward foot never completed its step. His sword hung in the air at the exact angle it had occupied a half second earlier. His lungs held whatever air they had been holding and declined to exchange it.

The cost is visible: sweat at his hairline, tightness around the eyes, hands beginning to shake.

Why he did it

He explains himself to a boy who cannot move, at volume, in front of the whole arena.

DAN: I won this last year. I have won every formal match I have fought at this academy since I arrived, and every year somebody decides that the reason must be luck, or the bracket, or that nobody has properly tested me yet.

DAN: Ashby beat me at the festival. Weapons only. No abilities. Do you know what people have been saying since? That the Whitlock boy can be taken. That a first-year did it in front of everyone.

DAN: Nobody said what the format was. Nobody ever says what the format was.

DAN: I have been carrying this for four years while people who cannot conceive of it decide amongst themselves how impressive it-

Arthur moves inside it

Twice, and nobody can explain either.

Arthur's fingers twitched. It was nothing. It was two fingers on his sword hand, moving perhaps a quarter of an inch.

DAN: That's not possible. [...] That is not possible. Nothing moves in this. Nothing has ever moved in this.

He closed his hand around the grip. Slowly. Perhaps a full second for the whole motion, a fist closing at the speed of something being dragged, but closing.

And Dane Whitlock, defending champion, four years undefeated, took a step backward.

Arthur's read, from inside a body that cannot move: "he had just frightened him."

Then Dane punches a boy who cannot defend himself.

DAN: Stop. [...] STOP.

It was not a technique. It was a punch, thrown hard and badly by someone who had run out of composure, straight at the face of a boy who could not defend himself.

Arthur moved his head four inches.

He had no idea how. He never afterward had any idea how, and neither did anyone watching.

Sutton is between them immediately.

SUT: Match to Whitlock. Get back, both of you. NOW.

DAN: I wasn't- SUT: I know what you weren't. Get off my ground.

Open questions

  • What the field is called. Nobody names it, including him.
  • Whether the absolute setting has a time limit, or only a cost.
  • How Arthur moved inside it. Twice.
  • The other two of Sutton's three. Sutton himself caught an Alchemically enhanced blade between two fingers in ch. 260 without being burned, which may be one of them.

Appearances

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