The incarnate
The saga has one formula for saying what a being fundamentally is, and it uses it fourteen times across three volumes. X incarnate.
Every use
| Who | What | ch. | Who says it |
|---|---|---|---|
| The End | destruction incarnate | 1 | narration |
| Marlow Thorne | honor incarnate | 9 | Blook |
| Rogen Thorne | truth incarnate | 13 | Blook |
| Louch Ashford | pride incarnate | 18 | Blook |
| Aquila | Balance incarnate | 20 | narration |
| Shen | destruction incarnate | 37 | Neru, mid-fight |
| Aldric Thorne | evolution incarnate | 51 | himself |
| Nilah | ferocity incarnate | 51 | herself |
| Gabriel | purity incarnate | 53 | Remi |
| Lucifer | malevolence incarnate | 53 | Remi |
| Vazroth | despair incarnate | 53 | Remi |
| Akumu | fear incarnate | 53 | Remi |
| Icarus | not incarnate | 53 | Remi |
| Jade | despair incarnate | 61 | herself, and refuted |
Ch. 23 is titled "Nightmare Incarnate", which is the only use in a chapter title.
The authoritative list
Ch. 53. Remi has been dead since ch. 20 and answers the narrator from the heavens, in the italics he uses for that whole chapter.
Many before him symbolized primal truths with their souls: Gabriel is purity incarnate, Lucifer is malevolence incarnate, Vazroth is despair incarnate, and Akumu is fear incarnate. Icarus is not fury incarnate, or vengeance.
Then what is he, Remi?
He's the first and only apostle of Freedom.
This is the only place the formula is defined rather than applied. To be incarnate is to symbolize a primal truth with your soul. It describes what a being is made of, not what it decided.
Icarus is refused the category
The line rules out the two readings his story invites, fury and vengeance, and gives him a different kind of word instead.
An apostle serves something. An incarnation is something.
First and only is the other half. Nothing else in the saga is called an apostle of anything, before or after.
The volume titles disagree
Ch. 53 says apostle belongs to Icarus alone. Two volume titles use it for somebody else.
| Volume | Title | Who it points at |
|---|---|---|
| 2 | The Apostle Of Fear | Akumu, whom ch. 53 calls fear incarnate |
| 6 | The Apostle Of Love | not yet checked against its chapters |
The volume titles do not come from the chapters. They come from The Continuity, a separate merged chapter, which makes them the author's framing rather than a character's claim.
So the collision is between two levels of the text, not two lines in it. Remi's "first and only" is spoken inside the story. The volume titles sit outside it. Recorded, not resolved.
Saying it about yourself does not make it true
Three characters apply the formula to themselves. The text handles all three differently, and the pattern is consistent.
Aldric is interrupted. Ch. 51, mid-sentence, and Nilah does not argue with the claim. She diagnoses him.
ALD: I am not some common tyrant to be overthrown by righteous fury. I am evolution incarnate. I am- NLH: You're afraid.
Ch. 53 then says that fear is Akumu. Nilah's two words place Aldric under somebody else's category rather than in one of his own.
Jade is refuted outright. Ch. 61, and the narration answers her directly.
JAD: You can't do this to me! I am despair incarnate! I am the inevitable truth that waits at the end of every hope!
But you are only a fraction of them.
Despair is already assigned, to Vazroth, eight chapters earlier. Jade is told she is a fraction, which is the saga's other structural idea. See the-fragment-theory.md.
Nilah is the exception. Ch. 51, one line after Aldric, holding a blade in her bare palm.
NLH: And I am Nilah. I am ferocity incarnate. And I burn for those who cannot.
Nobody contradicts her, then or later.
Ch. 149 makes it literal. Vazroth pulls her soul out of her chest, holds it up, and crushes it. Her body stands and keeps fighting, and the chapter says what is doing it:
Not a soul - that still burned dying in his grip. But something older. Something that had lived in her flesh so long that when the soul departed, it remained. The fire itself given consciousness.
Vazroth, who has been collecting debts for millennia, asks "What the fuck are you?" and has no answer.
So of the three self-claims, the one nobody argued with is the one the saga later proves. See ../characters/nilah.md.
Blook's refrain
Twice in Act 1 he uses the same sentence about two different people, and the repetition is exact.
- Rogen Thorne, ch. 13: "He'd become truth incarnate, and it was killing him one honest word at a time."
- Louch Ashford, ch. 18: "He'd become pride incarnate, and it was killing him one perfect day at a time."
Both sentences also open the same way: "refined by it. Distilled down to pure essence of what he represented."
So in Blook's usage the formula is not a compliment or a rank. It is a diagnosis, and the prognosis is in the same breath.
What it explains
- Gabriel and Lucifer are not a good one and a bad one. They are purity and malevolence, and they guard the world together. Ch. 5 already had them split fourteen disciples into seven Virtues and seven Sins without treating it as a contradiction. See the-fourteen.md.
- Vazroth's sentence fits what he is. Despair incarnate is put inside a narration he cannot act on. See the-narrator.md.
- Akumu is fear, which is why Acts 2 and 3 work through terror rather than force, and why his brackets give orders to frightened people.
- Destruction is used twice, for The End in the Prologue and for Shen in ch. 37, across the largest gap in the saga. Shen's is not narration. It is Neru deciding, mid-fight, that his opponent is more honest than he is, and choosing to stop holding back because of it.
Open questions
- What Remi is. The list places everybody else and leaves him off it.
- Whether Zero belongs on it, and what Zero would be.
- Whether an apostle is a role that can pass to somebody else, since "first and only" implies the category could hold more.
- What Illia and Blook are, given ch. 134 makes them halves of Zero rather than incarnations of anything. See the-fragment-theory.md.
- Whether Shen and The End share destruction the way Vazroth and Jade contest despair, or whether one of the two uses is loose.